Sunday, October 28, 2018

That Moment

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That moment will happen to us all
When the ghosts hover waiting
The way we anticipate a baby's birth
Then rejoice at its exposure to earth

Only ghosts know how to celebrate
Life's slide through that tunnel of pain
Releasing us to...the other side
Where sheets cover our souls then fly
Somewhere none could imagine

At that moment we'll know 
What only ghosts behold
About  our fear while here:

We're not really afraid
of ghosts
But of that moment 
When we become one 







17 comments:

  1. Ah, indeed. The psychology behind ghosts and the fear thus generated and felt is nothing but our struggle with mortality.
    I liked this bit: "Only ghosts know how to celebrate/Life's slide through that tunnel of pain".
    -HA

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  2. No not the ghost perhaps... more that we don't really know I think.

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  3. An intriguing (and no doubt true) poem.

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  4. Oh, this is SO GOOD! That is exactly it! Wonderful, Myrna.

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  5. This was like flipping a picture around to see a completely different image--the celebrating ghosts are captivating.

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  6. An insightful and nicely rendered piece, Myrna. I think you've 'hit the nail on the head', here. An awesome - and wise - bit of writing.

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  7. I agree, Myrna, we are afraid of ghosts because we KNOW that we will eventually become one ourselves. In that lies the fear. A great poem for the end of Ocrober.

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  8. So true, ghosts can be alluring, but I think all of us want to stay in human form for as long as possible.

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  9. Well if that is how it is I hope they say "It's OK, weve got a writers club up here".

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  10. Love that last verse.. the fear of the unknown..the moment of letting go! Wonderful!

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  11. I think it's natural to be afraid of ghosts for we know so little about them. Great write, Myrna ❤️

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  12. Ah, a new take for Halloween. LOVE the conclusion here and now I're really rethinking ghosts.

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  13. Our fear of the other is inbuilt. Though the more we grow the more still we ponder
    "Only ghosts know how to celebrate
    Life's slide through"

    Thanks for dropping by my sumie Sunday this week

    Much❤love

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