Romantic couple in Carlsbad, California |
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Never look straight at the sun!
Its radiance can make you blind
Like the faith in which we stared
When the sun imprinted us
With yellow beams of hope
for a marriage full of fun.
With yellow beams of hope
for a marriage full of fun.
Were we ever that young?
Yes. We trusted the sun would always shine
Though such naïveté could not survive
Those cloudy, rainy times of flood,
Illusions drowning.
Illusions drowning.
During those days we began to understand
Not just the sun, but WE
Must reflect light.
Must reflect light.
Now after so many years of calm and stormy weather
We've learned, unlike the sun
our love never sets, it thrives
even in darkness of night.
our love never sets, it thrives
even in darkness of night.
(For Poets United.)
A wonderful affirmation of your partnership, Myrna. I especially love the wisdom of learning not just the sun but you both had to shine. I love the photos too.
ReplyDeleteCongrats Myrna on 47 years....and oh what an amazing poem...such truth in these words:
ReplyDelete'Now after so many years of calm and stormy weather
We've learned, unlike the sun
our love never sets, it thrives
even in darkness of night.'
Truly beautiful. And I love that your relationship thrives - night or day.
ReplyDeleteReflecting light on to each other and learning to thrive even in darkness...yes! Both wise things to learn and clearly keys to a long, happy marriage :-) Congratulations!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful sentiment, an inspiration to look up too.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely take, the sun within is what we all need to keep it all together.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely testimonial of love surviving the tests of times. Happy anniversary
ReplyDeleteWe've learned, unlike the sun
ReplyDeleteour love never sets, it thrives
even in darkness of night.
Such a gorgeous close on this wonderful poem.
Beautifully executed :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
This is beautiful, Myrna. I especially like "unlike the sun, our love never sets." And yes...every person...every relationship should reflect light!
ReplyDeleteWe began to understand Not just the sun, but WE - i love that line and admire the gratitude that shines in these words which in a way does tell the story whilst keeping it sacred to you both - and congratulations also - an achievement for sure
ReplyDeleteWow..47 years is just wonderful. Congratulations. Love the sentiment in your poem.
ReplyDeleteSWEET!
ReplyDeleteZQ
"Not just the sun, but WE
ReplyDeleteMust reflect light."
That's so wonderful. Happy Anniversary.
I love this poem; it expresses how people grow in a relationship and the true side of things. :-)
-HA
So remarkable words, esp. WE... Congratulation, Mirna, on your anniversary! Many more years! Your are blessed! This is very powerful poem! And photos -ah!taking breath! thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteHappy anniversary ~ How lucky both of you are ~ Be the light to each other, even in darkness ~
ReplyDeleteexquisite. tender. grateful. these are the words that came to mind as i read your poem. :)
ReplyDeleteand congratulations on your wedding anniversary!
A lovely extended metaphor ... beautifully rendered.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations and love seeps through your words,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
I totally loved this... The way you have related sun and togetherness... Hats off!
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