I fell up
through a hole in the sky,
tumbling.
Landing amidst creatures so strange
Landing amidst creatures so strange
perplexing.
A tiny little globe perceiving
A tiny little globe perceiving
colors astounding.
Textures, structures, fabrics
Textures, structures, fabrics
brilliantly mixing,
deceiving.
deceiving.
Tiny minds
yearning.
On unknowing clouds
I floated, innocently
watching
watching
particles melding.
Separation turned One,
Separation turned One,
opposites annihilating.
From such intricate fantasy
From such intricate fantasy
awakening, I knew
reality's dream
stumbling, falling
on the little globe.
on the little globe.
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Nice dream - great one shot
ReplyDeletecheers :)
beautiful you.
ReplyDeletehow cool to share your dreams with us.
keep dreaming!
A++
A fun poem! Quite creative.
ReplyDeleteMyrna,
ReplyDeleteI often wonder what it would be like without gravity, to fall up and then enter another atmosphere. I can only imagine the metaphores hidden in your words. I enjoyed your poem very much.
Kristen
Kristen
I would love to know reality's dream! Great poem.
ReplyDeletefell up through a hole in the sky...nice...rather whimsical...would love to see the blue marble from the sky...
ReplyDeleteLoved how you started it on a positive note/word 'up' instead of 'down'
ReplyDeleteAh, that was a nice trail of imagination. I wonder how it will be to fall "up" instead of 'down.' Your verse had cancelled the laws of gravity and now, that is what I call creative licence!
ReplyDeleteJoy and peace,
Susan
I love the first two lines - that is the best way to fall...
ReplyDeletexoxo
Beautiful poem Myrna...and not sad...Yay! I can imagine the tiny flakes inside a "snow globe"...or the Who's down in Whoville...somehow in reading this...there is a playfulness, at least for me.
ReplyDeleteIt brings to light feelings of the universe on us. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteFabulous imagery. You really nailed this one! I copied it and sent it to my husband.
ReplyDeletenice and dreamy space trip myrna - have written a space poem as well today but needs a bit work before it will be ready for posting...
ReplyDeleteSounds like a transcendental moment, Myra! Nice One Shot!
ReplyDeleteThanks again for this fantastic piece.
ReplyDeleteAloha from Waikiki!
ReplyDeleteSorry I haven't been around for a while, but you read my post on Tuesday so I'm sure you understand. Wishing you all the best!
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have a lovely day...
ReplyDeleteAward/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Thursday!
What a beautiful vantage point, liberating our perspective.
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem. it reminds me that we are all one and inter-connected.
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