tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post7040275453077714805..comments2023-10-26T01:28:26.326-06:00Comments on Daily Spirit: WRITING POETRYMyrna R.http://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-29912886228837675342015-09-01T18:32:03.391-06:002015-09-01T18:32:03.391-06:00A lovely poem, Myrna. Sometimes the waters of crea...A lovely poem, Myrna. Sometimes the waters of creativity flow freely, gushing out of us like water from a fountain - there is the joy! However, sometimes we have to express each precious drop with great effort and each globule gives one great pain, but at the same time relief...Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-58031349911939007952015-08-28T12:19:25.930-06:002015-08-28T12:19:25.930-06:00I don't know about the wisdom of infancy (whic...I don't know about the wisdom of infancy (which I don't remember,) but I do wonder about the "wisdom" of boyhood because I really don't know how much of what I believed back then was a delusion versus a higher knowing.Snowbrushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00436087215476479042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-29072824805768360522015-08-28T06:29:00.047-06:002015-08-28T06:29:00.047-06:00This felt so very lyrical, love the message. This felt so very lyrical, love the message. Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-34242041001278576552015-08-28T00:16:56.872-06:002015-08-28T00:16:56.872-06:00yes i too enjoyed ...wisdom of my infancy. it conn...yes i too enjoyed ...wisdom of my infancy. it connotes for me a 'purity of innocence'<br />wisdom is pure<br /><br />nicely pennedMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-4906478823406717212015-08-27T13:09:57.725-06:002015-08-27T13:09:57.725-06:00Beautiful.
Thanks for visiting.Beautiful. <br /><br />Thanks for visiting.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-46256170439527445032015-08-27T12:40:55.149-06:002015-08-27T12:40:55.149-06:00This is so beautifully weaved. Loved the poem :)This is so beautifully weaved. Loved the poem :)Purba chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10726789340791239305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-12430977811721283812015-08-27T11:30:30.070-06:002015-08-27T11:30:30.070-06:00What a beautiful take on the prompt.What a beautiful take on the prompt.Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-13780209023616747982015-08-27T10:55:45.715-06:002015-08-27T10:55:45.715-06:00I like the phrase "wisdom of my infancy"...I like the phrase "wisdom of my infancy" very much. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-3677989521605656972015-08-27T08:22:48.161-06:002015-08-27T08:22:48.161-06:00I'm infused with joy by the hum of its waves.
...I'm infused with joy by the hum of its waves.<br />Its gentle vibration soothes the infant in me.<br /><br />One marvels at poetry retaining the child's wonder of its beauty. Very true Myrna!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-79243863053857292442015-08-27T08:21:14.922-06:002015-08-27T08:21:14.922-06:00there's something so pure and un-artifical in ...there's something so pure and un-artifical in writing poetry - in letting those words find us... beautifulClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-88392255047960807782015-08-27T06:28:03.418-06:002015-08-27T06:28:03.418-06:00"I'm infused with joy by the hum of its w..."I'm infused with joy by the hum of its waves"...such a precious line Myrna...thank you...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-50658197443202524292015-08-26T20:34:41.491-06:002015-08-26T20:34:41.491-06:00I can't help but agree with you, Myrna.I can't help but agree with you, Myrna.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-29563947905961395592015-08-26T19:05:06.265-06:002015-08-26T19:05:06.265-06:00Infused by joy and the hum of its waves describes ...Infused by joy and the hum of its waves describes this poem....the magic of poetry!rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-67861412776701000062015-08-26T17:33:49.417-06:002015-08-26T17:33:49.417-06:00How true that we have wisdom in infancy when choic...How true that we have wisdom in infancy when choices are clear cut but as we grow older we become more daring, careless in fact, searching and failing and long for innocence...but it is there all around us if only we could see as a child.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-787171620156445312015-08-26T16:22:48.608-06:002015-08-26T16:22:48.608-06:00What an incredible metaphor for poetic creation. ...What an incredible metaphor for poetic creation. Love it - and thank you.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-44403373883002394192015-08-26T15:14:21.936-06:002015-08-26T15:14:21.936-06:00You enlighten me with "the wisdom of my infan...You enlighten me with "the wisdom of my infancy." Though I often seek that truth in poetry, I find it rare and so even more precious.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-71651073441494902015-08-26T15:07:06.844-06:002015-08-26T15:07:06.844-06:00the wisdom of my infancy.... I never thought of i...the wisdom of my infancy.... I never thought of it that way.... but, yes, I think you something there.<br /><br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-25197382372824510242015-08-26T14:35:06.914-06:002015-08-26T14:35:06.914-06:00The simplicity and innocence of that age are defin...The simplicity and innocence of that age are definitely prone to and causes joy. There is comfort in the immersion as wellXhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-16217000325206751442015-08-26T14:06:51.572-06:002015-08-26T14:06:51.572-06:00Love the opening lines to this marvelous piece :D
...Love the opening lines to this marvelous piece :D<br />Beautifully penned!<br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-64022230112145106792015-08-26T13:56:44.949-06:002015-08-26T13:56:44.949-06:00Wow, this is a VERY cool response to the prompt. H...Wow, this is a VERY cool response to the prompt. How cool to contemplate that our Muse wells up from the most innocent, untouched parts of us. I love this, Myrna. Love "I'm poetic in the flow of the birthing waters of creation." Stellar lines!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-14914766026021751712015-08-26T13:52:39.536-06:002015-08-26T13:52:39.536-06:00Beautiful!Beautiful!Sandihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08702620069148109246noreply@blogger.com