tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post476994307263450880..comments2023-10-26T01:28:26.326-06:00Comments on Daily Spirit: WaitingMyrna R.http://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-47938315803257003752014-05-02T23:23:13.259-06:002014-05-02T23:23:13.259-06:00As usual, it's wonder dear Myrna. So many laye...As usual, it's wonder dear Myrna. So many layers of meaning that speak to me. I hope you are being kind to yourself. Much love across the miles.Chrisyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01954004833710064612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-64085328197820073162014-03-22T06:54:57.908-06:002014-03-22T06:54:57.908-06:00This is beautiful and at the same time it contains...This is beautiful and at the same time it contains a self-confessed fragility that makes it strong as a poem. Loved it.<br /><br />Greetings from London.A Cuban In Londonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16423293358605007539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-82871091629633925532014-03-10T18:10:08.968-06:002014-03-10T18:10:08.968-06:00Fantastic write Myrna! You bring realities into th...Fantastic write Myrna! You bring realities into the open and cruise through with anticipation forever goodness will be detected, Clever twist!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-52640342342299776282014-03-06T16:32:47.191-07:002014-03-06T16:32:47.191-07:00Nice poem. I find it both fascinating and scary to...Nice poem. I find it both fascinating and scary to see how we change our skills over time. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10304701332216772385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-38342307676959989472014-03-06T08:45:27.468-07:002014-03-06T08:45:27.468-07:00i think it's difficult for ourselves to see ho...i think it's difficult for ourselves to see how our writing changes overtime...it is evolutionary slow sometimes we think and often we only find it in the details or have others that see and tell us... i try not to compare my writing to others..i get frustrated otherwise cause there's always someone who is better in everything we do - not only in writing life - and i think it's good to just go and write on - and fly a bit... smiles... started with a bang... i like...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-18179529031183489722014-03-05T12:37:41.167-07:002014-03-05T12:37:41.167-07:00ah.. yes.. it might start with a bang.. but the pr...ah.. yes.. it might start with a bang.. but the progression the evolution is slow and steadfast.. love your imagery on the ages ... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-37644237940621235222014-03-05T09:50:44.821-07:002014-03-05T09:50:44.821-07:00A wonderful flow of words and images. Lovely!A wonderful flow of words and images. Lovely!The Drugstore Notebookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03765691836825116523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-85446515134447603922014-03-05T09:33:40.792-07:002014-03-05T09:33:40.792-07:00Myrna, the cxoncept behind this poem was very imag...Myrna, the cxoncept behind this poem was very imaginative. >KBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-47592773427209983862014-03-05T07:51:37.037-07:002014-03-05T07:51:37.037-07:00Myrna, I can identify with sometimes reading poems...Myrna, I can identify with sometimes reading poems to see if something will rub off on me. I have a few favorites that will sometimes inspire if nothing else does. I also agree that evolution can be pretty undetectable; but if one compares one's poetry from one time to another one can sometimes see the change that has subtly taken place.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-82210579925871328512014-03-05T06:29:41.124-07:002014-03-05T06:29:41.124-07:00This is great.... I love it !This is great.... I love it !ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-85161853225578653262014-03-05T04:48:37.988-07:002014-03-05T04:48:37.988-07:00Sometimes we don't detect the changes but read...Sometimes we don't detect the changes but reading other poems and digesting them inevitably affects or changes us ~ When I read Neruda's poems, you can bet that I will writing some love poems, smiles ~<br /><br />Take care Myrna ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10891325463576751768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-36106649009015695772014-03-05T00:45:54.460-07:002014-03-05T00:45:54.460-07:00it can be very hard to see your own growth... ugh,...it can be very hard to see your own growth... ugh, I'm def my own biggest critic...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-62044484191932505672014-03-05T00:29:30.463-07:002014-03-05T00:29:30.463-07:00Perhaps it's more palpable if it's a vibra...Perhaps it's more palpable if it's a vibrant force in your life...it will come if you want it...your style evolves as you do...slow is just fine, too..if you compare your earlier work with the present, you must see it is better ;)Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-7493294303770984602014-03-04T23:53:52.377-07:002014-03-04T23:53:52.377-07:00Myrna, I love this poem so much..........one of yo...Myrna, I love this poem so much..........one of your best! Sometimes when we think not much is happening, gestation is going on - and it births a poem like this one! I love "like a baby snail, I follow".....and, especially, "As a poet, if I were earth, <br />dinosaurs would still roam, unsuspecting.<br />As a poet, I long for my new universe,<br />while I wait <br />for my own ice age."<br />Poems just dont come any better!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-49879083518586228542014-03-04T23:10:07.955-07:002014-03-04T23:10:07.955-07:00thanks for sharing your worlds with us. It helps ...thanks for sharing your worlds with us. It helps mine grow beyond what I know.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-29294234376689322672014-03-04T21:45:39.208-07:002014-03-04T21:45:39.208-07:00I like this poem. You're good.I like this poem. You're good.Shoshanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06413291283753169902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-18819482965125287682014-03-04T21:28:27.030-07:002014-03-04T21:28:27.030-07:00To recognize our own growth is sometimes the most ...To recognize our own growth is sometimes the most difficult evolution of all. Great piece! I miss having the time to read and write with everyone!Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-19109384707396299742014-03-04T21:07:32.612-07:002014-03-04T21:07:32.612-07:00"But evolution is sometimes undetectable, / t..."But evolution is sometimes undetectable, / things seem unchanged." I am right there with you. RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-12239742666699694112014-03-04T20:58:20.518-07:002014-03-04T20:58:20.518-07:00I suspect, (I know) you are underrating your power...I suspect, (I know) you are underrating your power, and the growth of your voice.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-7819595642246327032014-03-04T20:15:35.093-07:002014-03-04T20:15:35.093-07:00Let us be "primitives" together!
ALOHA ...Let us be "primitives" together!<br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> <br />=^..^= <3<br /><br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-60038130277291924952014-03-04T20:00:16.644-07:002014-03-04T20:00:16.644-07:00i agree...i think we dont see our evolution as muc...i agree...i think we dont see our evolution as much as others can see it in us...its very gradual...i learn a lot in reading others....and ha...you wont go extinct...by ice age or otherwise...you have a voice...keep using it...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com