tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post1735799254416011877..comments2023-10-26T01:28:26.326-06:00Comments on Daily Spirit: BEING THE PERFECT EXMyrna R.http://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-19260525210130320182012-06-21T11:55:28.335-06:002012-06-21T11:55:28.335-06:00What a finish - wasn't expecting that at all! ...What a finish - wasn't expecting that at all! Just today I was thinking of writing a post on people who love too much!Corinne Rodrigueshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00127426375705808776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-10690563740491500952012-06-18T17:24:30.316-06:002012-06-18T17:24:30.316-06:00I didn't know that you can write prose too ~ W...I didn't know that you can write prose too ~ What a perfect ex he is ~ too much can be suffocating as well ~<br /><br />Nice twist at the ending, I didn't see it coming ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-58957151227604558382012-06-18T14:38:46.201-06:002012-06-18T14:38:46.201-06:00Oh, this was good, liked the way it ended, so unex...Oh, this was good, liked the way it ended, so unexpected.;) The matters of love can lead people to do unspeakable things.;)<br />Have a great week ahead dear Myrna,<br />xoxoZuzanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02137958790178864561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-58211308643870011992012-06-18T12:00:46.968-06:002012-06-18T12:00:46.968-06:00Yikes!
I like how different this story is in the...Yikes! <br /><br />I like how different this story is in the way that men can sometimes seem perfect to outsiders, but the adoration is sometimes too much. And often seems to be more about themselves and their insecurities than it is about you.<br /><br />What a shocking ending, though! Wow.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13195645967378589211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-27772748158588997342012-06-18T12:00:36.720-06:002012-06-18T12:00:36.720-06:00Yes, I have known that too... resenting a guy beca...Yes, I have known that too... resenting a guy because all of your friends thought you were stupid for breaking up with him.Celeste Neumannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06121686507934885254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-32184863203928400452012-06-17T18:29:31.227-06:002012-06-17T18:29:31.227-06:00This engaged me all the way through Myrna. I even...This engaged me all the way through Myrna. I even felt suffocated by Michael. When I divorced my first husband, it was under similar circumstances - but I never sabotaged his brakes when he finally moved on, lol.<br /><br />This was well written, emotive, and the flow pulled me ever forward to read more. The ending was a neat twist, and made me giggle and agree :)<br /><br />.......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-41294110300322882412012-06-17T14:00:11.210-06:002012-06-17T14:00:11.210-06:00Oh that was fun!Oh that was fun!Galen Pearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10189831838630645863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-70601859842501452112012-06-17T12:13:42.100-06:002012-06-17T12:13:42.100-06:00Great flash. Too much attention irritates and then...Great flash. Too much attention irritates and then rankles when withdrawn...she wanted a dog not a husband, I liked the fact that you made your nasty character the focal point.Rek Seshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-21802802258089254702012-06-16T21:19:26.242-06:002012-06-16T21:19:26.242-06:00I wasn't expecting that at the end! WOW! What ...I wasn't expecting that at the end! WOW! What a twist!C.S.Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06931727241982253089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-19396773153145313162012-06-16T19:24:19.429-06:002012-06-16T19:24:19.429-06:00Great story, my friend. You are on a roll here.Great story, my friend. You are on a roll here.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-31219453757890369002012-06-16T15:03:12.590-06:002012-06-16T15:03:12.590-06:00oh heck...great story telling myrna..so she's ...oh heck...great story telling myrna..so she's responsible for his two deaths then...ugh.how can she live with that...sorry that i somehow missed this...was a bit busy those last days...happy saturday!!Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-81914415126107086012012-06-16T11:15:32.211-06:002012-06-16T11:15:32.211-06:00thank you ma'am...smiles....hope you have a gr...thank you ma'am...smiles....hope you have a great saturday!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-31000795873040923622012-06-16T10:58:33.455-06:002012-06-16T10:58:33.455-06:00the end shocked me!the end shocked me!ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-66966784181104492352012-06-16T07:21:27.143-06:002012-06-16T07:21:27.143-06:00Very wonderful read! Evil! From first sentence t...Very wonderful read! Evil! From first sentence to last your writing braids in all the foreshadowing and character and detailed events that make the story seamless and gorgeous and perfect. I look forward to reading more of your work.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-77790831862614372692012-06-15T23:12:44.548-06:002012-06-15T23:12:44.548-06:00Hello Myrna. Great that you came on board with a b...Hello Myrna. Great that you came on board with a bang! A nice twisty little tale you've woven here. I wasn't expecting the ending.<br /><br />This links to Andy's poem for this prompt - 'A wise man will always let go of what does not belong to him, but the foolish man will cry for what he believes is still his...'<br /><br />A warm welcome and I hope to see you writing more of your flash for the group.<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-27075493040007788852012-06-15T12:58:55.955-06:002012-06-15T12:58:55.955-06:00OMG! That was a shock at the end. I also love how ...OMG! That was a shock at the end. I also love how you wove in 'the perfect ex' into the story. And there was a nice touch of dry humor with the high cost of groceries.<br />Awesome job Myrna, I was expecting one of your beautiful poems, but you've proven you can push yourself to other forms too. Well done :)Charmaine Clancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18059559142070140041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-89787271643230652112012-06-15T12:14:29.681-06:002012-06-15T12:14:29.681-06:00Poor Michael! No matter what he did, he couldn...Poor Michael! No matter what he did, he couldn't get it rightHeather Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11847855601653718033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-61449739477349945892012-06-15T08:03:55.193-06:002012-06-15T08:03:55.193-06:00Greetings, Myrna. Love the telling of a smotherin...Greetings, Myrna. Love the telling of a smothering relationship.<br /><br />For readability purposes, it would be helpful to have an extra space between the paragraphs.<br />So nice to e-meet you.Beverly Diehlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392288953821757887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-52294793099128451102012-06-15T06:14:27.179-06:002012-06-15T06:14:27.179-06:00Dear Myrna,
Welcome to Romantic Friday Writers!
I&...Dear Myrna,<br />Welcome to Romantic Friday Writers!<br />I'm awestruck...this is some fine writing from you. For sure these two have some serious issues, but whoa...I wasn't expecting that twist at the end! I'd have to agree with Brian...definitely some Hitchcock going on. Nicely done my dear!<br /><br /><a href="http://thoughtsofbeautyinthestillnessofdawn.blogspot.com/2012/06/rfw-wk38-sands-of-unfaithfulness.html" rel="nofollow">Sands Of Unfaithfulness</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-51490862506254756182012-06-15T05:03:47.468-06:002012-06-15T05:03:47.468-06:00oh dang...def a hitchcock ending there...i was jus...oh dang...def a hitchcock ending there...i was just feeling happy for him and had forgotten you already told us that death had happened...nicely done myrnaBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-58909440281500503392012-06-15T04:03:48.913-06:002012-06-15T04:03:48.913-06:00This one started off as an ordinary conflict betwe...This one started off as an ordinary conflict between spouses. Love is not equal. We love in different ways and in different degrees. But then things seem to have gotten out of hand and the ending is bizarre. Film material maybe.<br /><br />I think this couple deserve each other. They are both crazy.<br /><br />Great post for the theme.<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br /><a href="http://annas-adornments.blogspot.se/2012/06/being-perfect-ex-rfwers-challenge-no-38.html" rel="nofollow">Anna's RFW #38</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773948027407820171.post-54261039567205330222012-06-15T01:46:31.765-06:002012-06-15T01:46:31.765-06:00Oh I've known people like that. Nice twist at...Oh I've known people like that. Nice twist at the end.Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.com