Tuesday, November 16, 2010
The Song of the Cosmos
From slumber stirred, I awakened to see
the entire universe before me expanding.
Through a rip in the veil of reality
I floated suspended
in nothing.
Alien feelings began to emerge:
true freedom, alone yet no fear.
Am I really the only one here?
Strange dark matter I embraced,
illuminating my soul.
Then a celestial concert I heard,
constellations in unison chanting.
Harmonious frequencies, perfect vibrations,
reverberations traversing infinity, all.
The song of the cosmos...
Oooooouuuuummmm
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ha nice myrna - a celestial concert - would have loved to listen to this...floating through the universe...sounds nice..
ReplyDeletelovely poem. I love your song of the cosmos, I know the feeling ;)
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by my place and thanks for the good wishes, the path is never smooth, but I'm trying to enjoy it as much as possible.
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Gabi
smiles. sounds like a concert i would enjoy...
ReplyDeleteCan't say I relate to it - spare me the sympathy, I'm not interested, thanks anyway - but nice peaceful feeling to this. Solid piece.
ReplyDeleteCosmos concert..... Saying the mantra OM over and over and surrendering to the vibrations of it is really wonderful
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem, language before and beyond language. I sure do like that.
ReplyDeleteThe entire universe chanting in harmony and your spirit filled and without longing. What a picture of the hereafter. Lovely writing. Thanks, Gay @beachanny
ReplyDeleteMyrna....
ReplyDeleteYou make the Cosmos sing...
Great One Shot....
yes, I remember...
ReplyDeleteAloha from Waikiki :)
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I too am often contemplating the mystery of the universe.;) So well described in a lovely poem.;)
ReplyDeletexoxo
The resonating sound of Om filling one with peace forever. Beautifully conveyed.
ReplyDelete"Om has a thousand meanings and one of them is welcome to the gods" says one poster. That sound has a power to calm and bring peace. For that matter any sound with care and a hummmm brings peace and tranquil. In a world filled with noise and more noise, peaceful sounds as Om are a welcome respite.
ReplyDeleteand you are not the only one there. All of us are there but still we feel we are all alone and taking in the sights and sounds.
I wish you peace, calm, comfort and lovely sounds.
Joy always,
Susan
There is indeed a universal vibration and it has corresponding frequencies in certain meditative sounds (like "ohm").
ReplyDeleteNice visuals. An interesting One Shot, Myrna.
Almost too beautiful to even imagine. What a lovely post!
ReplyDeleteDear Myrna
ReplyDeleteIts lovely. I enjoyed it so much... When the primordial sound 'Om' accompanies you, you dont feel fear but bliss. I loved the way you brought in the cosmic song at the end...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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This is a wonderful celestial escape.
ReplyDeleteWow, Myrna, I that! want to have a dream like that!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem Myrna! This captures the peace I sometimes feel when I'm lying in shavasana after taking a yoga class.
ReplyDeleteoutstanding! how powerful and peaceful Myrna!!
ReplyDeleteps - thanks a lot for your nice maternal comment in my post... I really appreciate your thoughts and warmness.
i o heard that celestrial concert with you....a wonderful write...cheers pete
ReplyDeleteanother beautiful poem!
ReplyDeletesimply amazing,
ReplyDeletelove the imagery....
Happy Sunday!